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DRYING TEARS
Contributed by
SLAMMER
on
Thursday, 14th October 2010 @ 08:58:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Wiped so many tears these past years
Cried out loud but nobody cared
Struggled to free myself & it all failed
Felt so much pain with no-one to share
Life' obstacles is wat i faced
I sat down & watched all my frends fade
lonely and deserted i laid
Peacefully lyk a lamb
my brain was juss full of haze
Oh! wat a shame
It must be difficult to be a male
Days paced
And the time i chased
But in an instant life turned into a maze
Anxious of 2moro my bones shaked
Damn! i thought to myself
Is my life this cursed
Wondering how i passed that phase?
Coz in my heart hope is wat i placed
& in the end victroy is wat i aced
Don't worrry this is a tale
From my mind it juss came
I juss hope its not lame.
Copyright ©
SLAMMER
... [
2010-10-14 08:58:00]
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Re: DRYING TEARS
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by chrisdavid on
Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 12:54:57 PM AEST
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Nice write but spelling so bad it takes away the feel of the poem.
Sorry, Chris. |
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Re: DRYING TEARS
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by bleedinheart on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 01:39:33 PM AEST
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| awh :( good poem hpe life gets better |
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Re: DRYING TEARS
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by 2bpositive on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 06:30:56 AM AEST
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A nice honest poem did you here write
I think you put a pretty good fight
Keep up the nice writing. |
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