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This Autumn Twilight.
Contributed by
cashfan1
on
Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 02:50:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The mellow hills are resting,
Their proud heads leaning against a hazy horizon.
Ochre tinged and russet flamed
The sky is melting slowly
Into a lake of rippling dreams.
In a wind shaken tree a solitary pigeon is grieving.
He grieves for summer and as I watch
He moans an almost human moan.
The sheep are lonely shadows creeping.
The fields lay in a stupor of meloncholy autumn twilight.
Above the hills the horizon shifts under the weight of stars
And I wait, blending with the mist at the moors edge.
Twig and leaf are parting company,
The lake cries out under dreams I cannot comprehend
And this autumn night is all set.
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2010-10-12 02:50:53]
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Re: This Autumn Twilight.
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by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 11:40:43 AM AEST
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The picture painted here,
captures the true essence of Autumn
somber,gloomy,shadowy,
drowned in lakes of beauty
precisely scribed passage
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: This Autumn Twilight.
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by RowenM on
Wednesday, 13th October 2010 @ 05:33:40 PM AEST
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And that's why i love Autumn so much! :D
Thanks for that beautiful poem! |
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Re: This Autumn Twilight.
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by ming on
Thursday, 14th October 2010 @ 12:23:59 PM AEST
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Nice
The sky is melting slowly
Into a lake of rippling dreams
ming |
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Re: This Autumn Twilight.
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by omarzz on
Friday, 15th October 2010 @ 06:35:56 AM AEST
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| Some beautiful words.Surely a great write |
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