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why cant you see she's all wrong?
Contributed by
potentialpoet96
on
Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 06:03:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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you said its your mistake,
and i'll leave it at that.
but i cant help but think,
i should have done something.
i know im annoying,
i know im persistant.
the only reason for that:
i love you.
i care about you,
i dont want you to get hurt.
you're my best friend,
i cant see yiu go throguh thing.
not to be blunt,
but she's just a whore.
not to be rude,
but you're all wrong.
i know you like her,
i know she's great.
but i know she's wrong.
i dont know why you cant see it..
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2010-10-11 18:03:07]
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Re: why cant you see she's all wrong?
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by krezrazor on
Thursday, 21st October 2010 @ 01:50:18 AM AEST
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| i know what its like. |
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Re: why cant you see she's all wrong?
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Friday, 19th November 2010 @ 02:40:14 PM AEST
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| Another nice job just keep writting. |
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