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The Day I Walked Away
Contributed by
RowenM
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Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 11:47:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Like an old grandma on her chair,
I became wiser.
Like a small rat against a snake,
I became a fighter.
Like a child on his birthday,
I became happier.
But most importantly;
Like a soothing breeze,
waving gently above the sea,
the day I walked away,
I became free.
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RowenM
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2010-10-09 11:47:34]
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Re: The Day I Walked Away
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by joydeep_nath on
Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 12:03:54 PM AEST
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| so poignant and beautiful! |
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Re: The Day I Walked Away
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 12:33:38 PM AEST
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| very beautiful! fantastic job! |
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Re: The Day I Walked Away
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 10th October 2010 @ 04:53:46 AM AEST
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| What a wonderful piece of writing!! Full of vitality and a truely readable poem. Well done. |
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