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If You...
Contributed by
ianstepp
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Thursday, 7th October 2010 @ 10:55:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If you lost all your teeth in an accident,
I’d pay to have them fixed;
If you like your M&M’s by color,
I’d have them unmixed.
If you had a bad day at school,
I’d relieve any headache;
And if you wanted to celebrate,
I’d make sure there was cheesecake.
If you were cold in the snow,
I’d give you my sweater;
And if you had to deal with cockroaches,
I’d make everything better.
If you gained fifty pounds,
I’d stay right by your side;
And if you had one too many,
I’d be sure to give you a ride.
If your name started with “Z”,
I’d put you at the top of my phone;
And if you ever feel lucky,
Know that you’re not alone.
If you didn’t like the patterns,
We saw on the ceiling;
I’d scrape them all off,
If we could just keep this feeling…
-Ian Stepp
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Re: If You...
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by waldenpond on
Thursday, 7th October 2010 @ 10:59:36 PM AEST
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| this is a very sweet write! i really enjoyed this... it made me smile. |
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Re: If You...
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 06:40:23 AM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: If You...
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by chrisdavid on
Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 07:06:18 AM AEST
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This is a very nice write. Obviously means a lot to you.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: If You...
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by regetful on
Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 10:41:38 PM AEST
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| Definitely makes me think about how I am treating others... thanks for helping me reflect on how selfish I have been lately... |
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