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forever
Contributed by
Lola101
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Thursday, 7th October 2010 @ 02:50:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Up higher and higher
Up round and round
High above the ground
baby its just you and me right now no one else exists in this moment
so why am I the only one dreaming, the only one wishing.
Hoping you'd finally notice me and not pass me by like the nothing that i feel
causing this pain that I feel deep inside to cut me through and through again.
Why cant you see that I could be all that you will ever need.
stop, look, and notice me.
Take my hand and give me a chance.
A chance to prove my love for you.
because this love baby can last forever.
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Re: forever
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th October 2010 @ 08:09:53 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Good write.
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Re: forever
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by thebadguy9999 on
Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 07:19:22 AM AEST
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