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October First
Contributed by
RowenM
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Tuesday, 5th October 2010 @ 07:05:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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It’s been one month,
Two weeks,
And three days
Since I kissed you.
Your taste,
I’m no longer familiar with.
Your smell,
It makes me dizzy no more.
What is left now?
Just a memory.
The problem with it?
The longer I keep remembering,
The harder it gets forgetting.
I do wish,
For one more kiss;
For one more touch.
Will I ever slip?
It’s been one month,
Two weeks,
Three days…
I’m just fine.
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RowenM
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2010-10-05 19:05:50]
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Re: October First
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by nrazak1 on
Wednesday, 6th October 2010 @ 08:06:00 AM AEST
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Awwwww.
I have the same problem. I always remember things therefore making it harder for me to move on. I hope you do get your one more kiss. :)
-Naadiya |
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Re: October First
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by NewGuy on
Thursday, 7th October 2010 @ 08:24:38 PM AEST
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| i can relate. Interesting wrok |
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Re: October First
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 04:17:34 AM AEST
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| A very nice piece of writing. I have read it several times and find it loaded with deep down meanings, well done. |
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Re: October First
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by huwbeauty on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 01:01:27 AM AEST
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| I can relate,I've slipped recently will wait till new year to quit. |
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