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Leaves
Contributed by
SSoloman
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Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 05:22:41 PM in AEST
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If the leaves can change
Than why can't I?
All they need is a simple change in seasons
To shed what they were
Why can't I be like the leaves?
To shed my exterior
And become a bolder color
instead of remaining attached to my branches
Why can't I be like the leaves?
Certainly letting the wind lead me
Except for the lack of gusts
To be my guide
I fall
Then begin an excavation
To rekindle my lust for life
To grow green with hope, excitement, and possibility
Until the seasons change
And I revert to what I always become
A green leaf turned rust
Just waiting to fall off.
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Re: Leaves
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by Anbarean on
Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 08:39:52 PM AEST
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| love your poem. good work |
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Re: Leaves
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by northernlights on
Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 11:30:46 PM AEST
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| I like the voice of challenge in this and the concept brought forward by the leaves changing so why can't we. |
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