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Occupied
Contributed by
CarrieLindeman
on
Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 04:42:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It's rather sad when you occupy my mind like this
When I have some much to focus on
But so little focus
You feel the same way
But towards her
You can't work or think without needing her near you
Yet you don't understand that
You send my mind spinning with the smallest glances
It hurts a lot to watch you walking with her
It feels unhealthy to be so invested in you
It would be so different
If you would ever leave me alone
But you don't
You sit in my head and stay there until I need you least
But I don't want you to leave me alone
I want you to hold me
And never let me go
I guess I am stuck
In between
Love, like, lust, and hate...
Right now you are, sadly, entirely occupying my mind.
Copyright ©
CarrieLindeman
... [
2010-10-04 16:42:32]
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Re: Occupied
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 5th October 2010 @ 12:22:55 PM AEST
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This is a real shame. You clearly fancy this guy but he already has someone else. There's nothing you can do except think 'if only he were mine'...
Great stuff, take care, Chris. |
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Re: Occupied
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by RowenM on
Tuesday, 5th October 2010 @ 06:44:14 PM AEST
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| It is so real. I could relate so clearly to the situation. I really liked it. Nice Work! |
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Re: Occupied
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by Dirkj on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 07:10:23 AM AEST
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| Nice work, the type of story line that i could understand |
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