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SILHOUETTE
Contributed by
willofree
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Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 08:57:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Such a long shadow you cast.
May I seek refuge in the coolness of your shade?
I am but a reflection of what is real,
too close for minute detail.
Figure and foreground,
each with a perception of what is around.
Only a small shadow of my presence is found.
In spite of the warmth of the sun,
your shade is very comforting.
It is in the comfort of shade that my best work is done.
In the shadows I shall hide,
where enchantment transcends the darkness inside.
Copyright ©
willofree
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2010-10-03 20:57:56]
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Re: SILHOUETTE
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by Zeberdee on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 09:34:08 PM AEST
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| Good poem, midway was a bit dry, but the ending was beautiful and meaningful. |
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Re: SILHOUETTE
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 06:55:35 AM AEST
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I like how you gave your silhouette some depth, a personality even. We've all wanted to seek refuge in our shadow at one point or another, as I believe many of us have also felt like a mere 'shadow of ourselves' at times. This is a very introspective piece Terry, I hope all is well with you.
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Re: SILHOUETTE
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 01:08:40 PM AEST
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I like the images you portrayed here.
It gave your subject interesting and insightful meaning.
Indeed, hiding is very comforting at times when we need it.
I enjoyed this overall!
take care
-K.Z.
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