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Forgotten
Contributed by
Chamaron
on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 07:48:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I hope you remember me
I hope you forget me
I hope you’re someone different now
I hope you find yourself
Staring at nothing
Trying to find my face,
Wondering where you’ve seen it before
I hope I pass you on the way to somewhere
And I look familiar
But you can’t remember my name
I hope you wake up in the middle of the night
Disturbed inside, terrified of remembering
More than nothing
I hope you tuck me away
So far in the back of the cave
Dust, cobwebs, forgotten,
Leaving only my skeleton
Put me in a box
Labeled “do not open”
Trap me inside
So you don’t feel a thing
Because that’s what I’m doing
It’s all I can,
This cold loneliness I call home now
But I can barely remember your face
Copyright ©
Chamaron
... [
2010-10-03 07:48:23]
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Re: Forgotten
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by Anbarean on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 10:29:58 AM AEST
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| Oh god this so amazing one you write. I can feel the pain in it and I love it. Great work keep it up. |
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Re: Forgotten
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by Bexstasy on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 11:46:46 AM AEST
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| My gosh. This.Is.Just.Brillaint! |
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Re: Forgotten
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by Rykor on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 01:10:34 PM AEST
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| Wonderful piece of work! You make the reader actually feel the emotions you are experiencing! |
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Re: Forgotten
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 08:09:31 PM AEST
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Very good write.
Bet this one released much frustration.
Awesome.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Forgotten
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by guiltycircles on
Monday, 4th October 2010 @ 04:51:40 AM AEST
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| yours word capture the emotion so honestly, you have painted a state of mind that you, i and i am sure many others have felt and experienced... thank you |
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