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Confusion
Contributed by
Bexstasy
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Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 11:55:55 AM in AEST
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Confusion often overwhelms me,
I just don't know what to think,
The voices scream in my head,
And it leads to some crazy link,
Is this real gut instinct?
Am I actually right?
Or is this just pure paranoia,
Causing this continuous fight?
You always say to trust you,
But I trusted you before,
I wish I knew that I trusted you now,
But I'm just not so sure,
I know I really adore you,
I think that makes it so hard,
I want to trust you with everything,
But it seems everything is scarred,
I know you don't understand,
You probably never will,
But I'd really appreciate it if you stayed,
Together we could conquer this hill,
Still they keep on shouting,
Can they not just let me be?
I'm sure it will carry on,
Until everybody leaves me.
Copyright ©
Bexstasy
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2010-10-02 11:55:55]
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Re: Confusion
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by evah2121 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 01:30:17 PM AEST
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| I agree, It's hard to follow your heart if your brain has power a well; but no matter what we have to expect for the best but be prepared for the worst. Its hard to trust someone again when they have let you down most of the time, but we have to stay strong.. Nice write :) |
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Re: Confusion
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by Anbarean on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 07:03:54 PM AEST
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| I like it and you are 100% true with it |
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Re: Confusion
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by DrcGaimer on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 01:25:49 PM AEST
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The heart vs fact and logic, has plagued mankind since our creation. What to do, what to do? Follow my heart or follow my head? Is there ever a correct decision?
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