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Bloom Again
Contributed by
DrcGaimer
on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 08:46:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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A flower is a beautiful thing,
as it proudly stands within the sunlight of spring.
It has reason to be full of pride.
As we admire it's petals and color,
we gaze upon it,
unaware that it was once another.
Had only we witnessed it's stride.
Beforehand devoid of it's character,
bare and exposed.
It had to endure the snow,
wind,
and bitter cold.
Though near death,
it refused to die.
It stood rooted through the storm,
withered,
yet not torn.
No matter how hard it's environment tried.
It remained steadfast and true.
Withstanding,
it would bloom again.
My friend,
so shall you.
Copyright ©
DrcGaimer
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2010-10-02 08:46:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Bloom Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bexstasy on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 11:58:12 AM AEST (User
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Oh! This is just beatiful! Actually brought a tear to my eye. :') And it's so lovely of you to write this for a friend that's having a rough time.
Wow, it's just amazing. :) |
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Re: Bloom Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bexstasy on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 12:02:51 PM AEST (User
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Oh! This is just beautiful! Actually brought a tear to my eye. :') And it's so lovely of you to write this for a friend that's having a rough time.
Wow, it's just amazing. :) |
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Re: Bloom Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by northernlights on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 12:15:21 PM AEST (User
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lucky to have a friend like you,beautifully written with care and a big heart |
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Re: Bloom Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by mvvenkataraman on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 10:33:10 PM AEST (User
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Dear respected Poet,
A human being is actually flimsy
We all are exposed to dangers
Which may attack body or mind
We must develop adequate guts
Your poem applies to everybody
You have composed for your chum
But, it is to all of us finely appealing
We will take notice of your advice
You have boosted our morale
You have strengthened our will
You have supplied enough hope
Thanks a lot my dear friend.
With best wises, Thanking you, Yours truly,
M V VENKATARAMAN |
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Re: Bloom Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anbarean on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 11:04:21 AM AEST (User
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its so sweet the way you express and then made your friend feeel so strong. |
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Re: Bloom Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 02:15:44 PM AEST (User
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I hope you shared this poem with your friend, and with some love and light I'm sure she will bloom again. Nicely done |
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Re: Bloom Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by irisblue on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 09:46:45 PM AEST (User
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inspirational, I love this |
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Re: Bloom Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by deusdeira on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 02:36:43 AM AEST (User
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wow... that was definitely inspirational. Never give up, never die. That is how I feel after reading your poem. |
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