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Un-Together Forever
Contributed by
Bexstasy
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Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 04:51:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I remember when you revealed your desires to me,
"Together forever",
That's what we would be,
I remember the day you gave the final blow,
I was a phase,
And it was my time to go,
I remember struggling, unsure of why,
Your face haunted me,
Your eyes watched me cry,
I remember the anger as I deleted your number,
You were with her again,
You always wanted her,
I remember the confusion when you got in touch,
Another sleepless night,
And it was just too much,
I remember you saying you've thought of me since the split,
You didn't when I was there!
I'm done with this ****!
You must have thought I would be there whenever,
But here's an idea;
Let's be un-together forever,
Copyright ©
Bexstasy
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2010-10-02 04:51:25]
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Re: Un-Together Forever
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by chrisdavid on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 07:08:43 AM AEST
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Oh, this is great. Love the title and poem. You stood your ground and didn't let him back. Good for you!
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Un-Together Forever
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by nrazak1 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 08:46:08 AM AEST
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Holy crap. That was amazing. You're very strong. If i still had serious feelings for a guy and he did that to me but he came back i don't think i'd be able to tell him to stay away. I hope you stay strong!.
-Naadiya. |
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Re: Un-Together Forever
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th October 2010 @ 12:43:44 AM AEST
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| Brilliant! Sometimes you gotta love yourself and put your heart to one side. Really enjoyed this piece :) |
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Re: Un-Together Forever
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by deusdeira on
Sunday, 14th November 2010 @ 06:20:59 AM AEST
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| love the title! and the poem! |
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