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Insomnia
Contributed by
Chenobi
on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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During the night you come up to my window
To bring yourself another sorrow
Pretty moon will start to crumble
You never think about tomorrow
Death warrant on my door
All the sins come back for more
You kissed the wall a thousand times before
And all is rotten to the core
Wishful thinking won't work tonight
I've been sinking in a glass of wine
I've been drinking the wrong kind
I've been thinking
And there's too much on my mind
My insomnia is like a crime you unconsciously commit every night
But if we are known to be modest, you and I should take the blame ourselves
And leave the honour to the others
I never dream and tell...
Copyright ©
Chenobi
... [
2003-04-19 23:45:00]
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Re: Insomnia
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by Silent-Cry on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 12:50:09 PM AEST
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| "My insomnia is like a crime you unconsciously commit every night "i loved it...this poem is so well written ,so beautiful...so WONDERFUL!i can't find the words... |
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Re: Insomnia
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by littlemo911 on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 11:12:11 PM AEST
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| i love the simile that you added in the poem. the poem is really good. |
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