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Rain
Contributed by
nrazak1
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Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 05:29:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Breathing in deeply.
As i close my eyes.
I let my senses speak.
As i begin to cry.
I hear a squeal of horror.
A child slips on the ground.
The mother runs over.
Scolding him about playing around.
I feel the moisture.
Seeping into my pores.
All the while my fingers.
Brush against doors.
My taste buds energize.
As my tongue run along my lips.
Waiting for that perfect moment.
When the drop is about to drip.
As i inhale.
The cold air travels to my lungs.
Penetrating my souls core.
Like a song that hasn't been sung.
I open my eyes.
Take the hoodie off my head.
Smiling with wonder.
And keep walking ahead.
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nrazak1
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2010-10-01 17:29:45]
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Re: Rain
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by emystar on
Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 06:55:31 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
good work.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Rain
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by chrisdavid on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 01:42:18 AM AEST
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This is very good. I HATE the rain but the world needs it.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Rain
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by Gilgamec on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 06:35:10 AM AEST
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| Nice one. The rain is such a cleanse. |
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Re: Rain
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by evah2121 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 01:32:56 PM AEST
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| You're writing gave me goosebumps! You're very talented and I like your abstract thinking. Good work. |
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