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Three Simple Words
Contributed by
nrazak1
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Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 05:09:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Those three simple words.
Uttered from my lips.
Pierced like a thorn in my heart.
Hit me like a ton of bricks.
I didn't really want to say it.
But inside i knew i must.
The times we've shared.
My heart says stay, but it's my mind i must trust.
Standing here all alone.
Watching life roll by.
Taking in those dreadful words.
....A tear drops from my eye.
How can i walk away from someone i love?
To take the road of a friend.
Can i reroute the course I've taken?
And start all over again.
May life be gentle with you.
May only the best come your way.
And on some quiet tomorrow.
You will realize things are better this way.
These three simple words.
Uttered from my lips.
Pierced like a thorn in my heart.
Hit me like a ton of bricks.
I whisper...Let Me Go.
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2010-10-01 17:09:16]
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Re: Three Simple Words
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by emystar on
Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 06:58:00 PM AEST
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Sad but very creative thinking and writing.
smiles,
emy |
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Re: Three Simple Words
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by chrisdavid on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 01:40:13 AM AEST
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Interesting. Why did you have to go?
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Re: Three Simple Words
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by evah2121 on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 01:35:43 PM AEST
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| Woww, I give you a thousand applauds and a million high fives. You did an outstanding job. |
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Re: Three Simple Words
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by cartay15 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 05:27:19 PM AEST
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| this is soo good! that's soo sad having to leave someone you love! |
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