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Tired Butterflies
Contributed by
Learnowit
on
Thursday, 30th September 2010 @ 09:46:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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For wealth is silence in a solemn way;
and stealth, alone waiting as seconds play.
Then in the still air is a lonely stare;
over there' isn't a care.
As in the ashes of time gone;
so are the shadows, their memories stand long.
And the watch in a shallow state of mind;
all is cast before, as there is nothing to find.
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Re: Tired Butterflies
(User Rating: 1 ) by NewGuy on
Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 06:39:30 AM AEST (User
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short but sweet, a well written piece, i enjoyed it greatly |
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Re: Tired Butterflies
(User Rating: 1 ) by resist77 on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 06:10:52 PM AEST (User
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A very mystical feeling this poem gave. I liked the title very much. |
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