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Hers
Contributed by
gothchick
on
Thursday, 30th September 2010 @ 02:46:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Whilst we are slowly getting older
You’re escaping from my sight
All these thoughts have made me colder
And i figured you were right
You’ll never fill the gap you fit in so precise
Nor will you ever replace the lost mind
But upcoming December is unavoidable
And the fourth is based on demise
Yet i stand alone in grieve
Since you were hold back again
And now i feel deceived
Cause yesterday you told me otherwise
You’re never home with me
But you never will be either
You’re tea is getting colder
As you left again to see her
Talking like you’re him is pleasing
Talking like you’re mine is lying
But i doubt you could ever be him
So being mine would be disappointing
But still...
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Re: Hers
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by nrazak1 on
Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 05:32:18 PM AEST
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| That was beautiful. |
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Re: Hers
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by chrisdavid on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 01:44:44 AM AEST
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Nice stuff. Got the point across well.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Hers
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by NewGuy on
Thursday, 7th October 2010 @ 08:22:53 PM AEST
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| excellent job! |
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