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Immortal Moments
Contributed by
Anbarean
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Thursday, 30th September 2010 @ 02:41:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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These moments will never come again
So come and whisper the charm of life
Stand by the placid rill,
But don't stand mute
Perish all the sad blues
Endure all the twinges
With a withering look,
Immerse the tale of woe
Then perk up yourself,
And carve an ode
There's nothing to decieve verity
There's no need of furtivness
Percieve the charm,it's only the moment
Yes...it's only the moment
Then let's make it immortal
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Re: Immortal Moments
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by evah2121 on
Thursday, 30th September 2010 @ 04:20:07 PM AEST
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| Very beautiful write. Keep up the good work :) |
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Re: Immortal Moments
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by ALackofColor on
Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 12:25:39 AM AEST
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That was absolutely fantastic.
I rarely see people write poems in this style, but this style is indicative of some of our greatest poets. You DON'T HAVE TO RHYME. Most people don't understand that, and they're scared to stray from it. But a lot of times, without rhymes, poems can be beautiful. Yours was definitely beautiful.
Great Job. |
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Re: Immortal Moments
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2010 @ 05:47:27 AM AEST
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| Another great write always use that gift you have I know you will. |
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Re: Immortal Moments
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by Butterflyperfect on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 12:27:25 PM AEST
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| I like this write. It is very well writtin and to me it was powerful. Thanks for the great poem :) |
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Re: Immortal Moments
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 2nd December 2010 @ 07:02:29 PM AEST
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| This poem is a perfect example of why rhyming is not always needed. I love the deep thoughts that this poem brings to mind. Anything that makes me think I appreciate, and I appreciate this poem. |
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