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When I Die
Contributed by
kvnstnfld
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Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 11:12:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I've been in a whole for a century
losing control in your hearts penetentary
sometimes I try and it comes off cliche
time flies when I die I wonder what they'll say
seems I have no time to make amends
with all the snakes and one night friends
I asked God if the angels will understand
I need a way out will they please take my hand?
see girl you used to be all that I had
seems you don't want me but I'm not mad
cant hope for tomorrow its only today
and when I die I wonder what they'll say
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Re: When I Die
(User Rating: 1 )
by ALackofColor on
Friday, 1st October 2010 @ 12:28:05 AM AEST
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It's not often that a poem will strike a chord in my heart to the effect that I will actually get chills down my spine...
Great write....
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Re: When I Die
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by 2bpositive on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 02:24:43 AM AEST
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| I feel your Pain. |
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