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The War Inside

Contributed by lonestranger on Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 12:16:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sometimes I feel lost,
like I'm stuck in a never ending maze
Living day to day
in and out of a daze

Seeming as though caught
in a current that won't let go
Such a helpless feeling
when you've lost control

Control of a mind
that has so much potential
Having dreams that if made true
would be monumental

But here it comes again
That evil spirit from deep within

Where to run
where to hide
Spiritual warfare comes
when theses spirits collide

Now it starts----------------------------->
duck, look out
This is a heavy weight bout

So lets stop, take a look
and put it in rewind
Do you still think
you're ready for a trip
through my mind

Good
I see you're still with me
Just watch your step in this mind
for the floors are bloody when slippery

Here we are
so stop and look around
Because the most danger is present
when you don't hear a sound
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

In the realms of this darkness
rest, hopes, dreams, and above all "peace"
Where pain, doubt, and calamity
will all cease

But you best believe we're
gonna battle to see that paradise
Because we're at the beginning,
that's in the middle
and each step you take in here
is a roll of the dice

So I hope
you're a gambling man
Cause every step we take from here
could land us in the devil's hand

Strife is there ahead
in the distance
So come on lets
show some resistance

For over there
spitting fire like a dragon's breath
Are all the thoughts
that lead to death

Where do they come from
you ask
Just trying to explain
is a task

But from the pit of my soul
Where even the angels fear to go

Lies a pit of sin
And it travels from there
up my brain stem

Look out
the fire is getting close
Wouldn't want you to become toast

Ya see I continually
struggle in this mind of mine
Ohhhhh............ I felt that
and them chills came from your spine

Copyright © lonestranger ... [ 2010-09-29 12:16:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The War Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 07:54:50 PM AEST
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I like this poem, it's full of life and character:)

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