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In The Fall
Contributed by
JenVT
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Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 09:12:54 PM in AEST
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I want to be alive in the Fall
I want to feel everything I have ever felt at any age in the Fall
In the Fall
I want to live, and relive again
The Autumns that have highlighted my life, created new life
Moments...when Autumn's quiet splendor brings unexpected magic
Times of warm mugs, racing hearts and sparkling possibilities
A crisp breeze ruffles the curtains, hinting
Behind the drab veil of ordinary life, Autumn awaits.
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Re: In The Fall
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by iodinelove on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 09:18:55 PM AEST
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I like the fall. Except my birthday...I always feel bad on my birthday.
keep writing.
always, abraham |
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Re: In The Fall
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by chrisdavid on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 01:07:34 AM AEST
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Great piece! Welcome to the site.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: In The Fall
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by holy on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 06:04:03 AM AEST
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You are doing very well, my friend. I am feeling the cool air with your poem.
Haha, it is Autumn here in China now. Yes, Autumn is full of fruits and grains, it bring us new hope for the following years.
At last, thank you for your visiting and sharing your smart peom.
I am looking forward to your new poems...... |
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