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My Blue Heaven
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 08:56:21 PM in AEST
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My Blue Heaven lies miles away...
800 miles needless to say...
To look with the eyes you couldn't see it...
You have to have my heart to truly feel it...
My heart is owned to the angel I adore...
She makes me humble and so much more...
12 hours away would seem so far...
If we weren't where we are...
Those eyes of deep green..
The most hypnotic I've seen...
One day I'll reach my Heaven...
To gaze deeply into them...
Until then I'm lost in the love of the one...
That started me up again when I thought I was done...
My Blue Heaven is not that far away...
when I close my eyes i'm there to stay...
I'm in it now and here to stay...
Because my Blue Heaven isn't that far away...
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Re: My Blue Heaven
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 10:32:15 PM AEST
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I was so happy to see you here! Iv missed you my sweet friend.
Missed the writes too! This is beautiful you made me sighhhhhhhh
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: My Blue Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 12:38:32 AM AEST
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I thought my eyes were deceiving me when I saw that there was a new posting from you. *does double take* Okay, guess it's true.
Anywho, ah love is an awesome thing and distance is no barrier, is it. Even if it will never, it's nice to dream . But I'm gonna leave the sighing and hugs to Michelle. :p
Buh bye for now,
Tim
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Re: My Blue Heaven
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by chrisdavid on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 01:05:19 AM AEST
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I liked this. Should distance get in the way of love? If you think it can work, go get her!
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: My Blue Heaven
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by Guhlaktus on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 12:59:54 PM AEST
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| Deep, emotional, really makes you think that distance has no meaning when love is guiding your way, it makes me reconsider some of the past choices i made when it comes to the ones ive lost because miles got in the way, amazing, im excited to read more poems by you. |
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