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Unseen pain
Contributed by
FadedHope
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Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 04:19:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I wash my hands of unseen pain, for what is left cannot be changed
Shall I wither and blow away, or summon the strength of yesterday
Can that fire be reclaimed or will my feelings fade away
If truth is the path I must take then honor and pride I forsake
Only tomorrow can show the fate of today
Still I hope still I pray
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Re: Unseen pain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 05:30:35 PM AEST
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| This is amazing. I love it |
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Re: Unseen pain
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 08:59:38 PM AEST
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| I really like the first two lines of this,can't think of better inspiration to deal with life and all it throws at you well written, |
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Re: Unseen pain
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by flatonator15 on
Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 06:27:54 PM AEST
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| a lot of powerfull words. I just hope you live day to day and let the worries of yesterday fade with today. don't think so much |
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Re: Unseen pain
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 03:55:55 PM AEST
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| I like it :p "only tomorrow can show the fate of today." A very clever and deep poem. And lets hope we don't have to "forsake" honor and pride to take the path of truth! |
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Re: Unseen pain
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by UpsAndDowns on
Monday, 15th November 2010 @ 12:02:45 PM AEST
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| It can be hard to face what is out of your control. It seems there are always two paths, giving up and moving forward. This is a great piece. I can really relate. |
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