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Poetess
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JakerBaker88
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Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 01:10:34 AM in AEST
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Brunette girl with an impish grin,
And eyes the deepest blue----
With pen in hand I write of worlds
No other but myself have seen,
And lay awake in dreamland
While my lanky body sleeps.
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JakerBaker88
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2010-09-28 01:10:34]
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Re: Poetess
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 01:26:11 AM AEST
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Okay, now ya' gotta post a pic in the pictures forum! 
Anyways, I am willing to bet money that in this community of poets there are many who can relate to laying awake in dreamland while our bodies sleep. I like that.
Nice to see you again.
Tim
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Re: Poetess
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 06:13:31 AM AEST
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| (Paste Timotheus' comment in-between these parentheses, and i'll claim it as my own unique and brilliant insight :) ) |
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Re: Poetess
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by chrisdavid on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 12:50:23 PM AEST
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Nice write. I presume you describe yourself perfectly!
All the best, Chris. |
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Re: Poetess
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by 2bpositive on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 12:30:20 AM AEST
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Nice.
Dear Poetess:
Short but descriptive have I been told
your features seem one of gold
but as far as the worlds you've seen and of that of which you dream
you don't seem to want to let me hold
Keep on writing. Thumbs up to you.
and remember
2bpositive always..... |
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