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Self Loathing
Contributed by
Buggsy
on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 11:24:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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As hope quickly fades,
With only ourselves to blame,
Pain and anger reign.
Copyright ©
Buggsy
... [
2010-09-27 23:24:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Self Loathing
(User Rating: 1 ) by mvvenkataraman on
Saturday, 2nd October 2010 @ 10:25:24 PM AEST (User
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Dear respected Buggsy,
The poem creates sadness
Just three lines only
Though it conveys meaning
I want from you more
Surely you can give ideas
That may be interesting
Do not put cuff to ideas
Just express in extra words
You are given a chance
To give vent to your thoughts
Will you please write further
To enlighten our minds?
Still your three lines
Are no doubt inspiring.
With best wishes, Thanking you, Yours truly,
M V VENKATARAMAN |
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