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Breathing Is Still Easy
Contributed by
Soundofsilence
on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 01:17:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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You have these burdens that you carry.
You're too stubborn
To let him touch them,
So you hand a few to me.
Your eyes begin to brighten
As mine grow heavy
And I love you,
So I pretend that breathing is still easy.
You have these burdens that you carry.
Sometimes I wonder
Where they all came from,
But I know where they are going.
And I know where you are going.
And I love you,
So I pretend that breathing is still easy.
One day, I will stop doing that.
No... That isn't true.
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Re: Breathing Is Still Easy
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 01:39:41 PM AEST
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Maybe, I'm a bit tired but I couldn't work out what the meaning is in this. Please enlighten me. I'm eager to know.
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Re: Breathing Is Still Easy
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th November 2010 @ 04:21:43 AM AEST
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This is a really good poem and it kept me stuck right throughout my reading of it.
I like.
Mickey |
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