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Twenty Pills Too Many
Contributed by
TheWildBeliever
on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 03:40:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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"Was this too many?"
Well, hell, take a guess
Maybe the thing you were expecting was cardiac arrest.
Was it good? Was it great?
Are you proud you're deficient?
Or maybe its so casual that to you its consistent
I wish I was there,
I just want to assist,
But half the time you feel so strong that its me you resist
Don't tell me what happened
You'll just break my heart
I don't take pride in hearing it from the start
Of what they did,
Or what they said,
And besides, if you take too many, I don't see why you'd care...
...Because by then you're dead
Copyright ©
TheWildBeliever
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2010-09-26 03:40:24]
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Re: Twenty Pills Too Many
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 07:17:13 AM AEST
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| Good Job! Drug addiction is a very controlling thing. I live in one of the most drugged filled towns in this Country and I have stood there watching friend after friend mess up their lives (or even die) as a result of drugs. It's very sad and I think you captured that feeling perfectly. GREAT POEM!!! |
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Re: Twenty Pills Too Many
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by tinybitinsane on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 08:41:22 PM AEST
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| this was a great post. Love how you protrayed drug abuse =[ thanks for posting |
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Re: Twenty Pills Too Many
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by MoonlitSilverWolf on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:49:22 PM AEST
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good write, sadly sometimes its all some think is the only thing left to do just to "survive" another moment
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Re: Twenty Pills Too Many
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by chrisdavid on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 12:54:20 AM AEST
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Drugs are a no-no. What is the point? They do you more harm than good. Enjoyed this.
Chris. |
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Re: Twenty Pills Too Many
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 02:20:59 PM AEST
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| If you were never there you will never understand. Its not by choice after awhile its to not be sick. But like I said you can watch and see the damage from afar and judge but you will never feel the pain maybe emotional yes but the real pain of a sad worthless life wishing for death cause its easier then the drug chase as you realize the years of waste. Try reading my poem "Try these shoes on" maybe give you somne insight to how addiction is |
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