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Crash and Burn
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 09:14:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She came out of no where
she said it was our time
loved me hard and blew my mind,
now she's saying it was all a mistake
left me for another
laughed in my face,
the damage is done
now
all I can do is stare...
and no one cares.
why
does love has to be so cold
why
why
why,
every time I try
I am left to cry
It comes on so fast
but
it never seems to last.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
... [
2010-09-25 21:14:13]
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Re: Crash and Burn
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by cashfan1 on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:09:49 AM AEST
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Cheer up my friend, one thing for sure, you write great poetry and should be rightly proud of that.
Nicely written, well done. |
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Re: Crash and Burn
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 11:13:22 AM AEST
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| you'll get over it.... theres plenty of girls willing to take her place.... |
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Re: Crash and Burn
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by DayLilly on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 05:58:29 PM AEST
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| that is great. i know how you feel:/ |
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Re: Crash and Burn
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by Rasberry on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 02:03:52 PM AEST
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| That's when you know it's not true. |
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Re: Crash and Burn
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 25th November 2014 @ 08:53:28 AM AEST
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Please tell me when you find the answer. :)
*mutters something inspiring about love and loss*
~Scorp |
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