|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Can't you see?
Contributed by
ladybell
on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 01:17:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
I hate when you lie to my face.
I hate it.
It makes me break down inside.
I cry so hard, harder then before.
Why do you do this to me?
DId I do wrong somewhere?
You mess with my head.
Can you see?
Can't you tell?
You think I don't see the lies.
I catch you in them everytime.
I wonder how many more.
Please stop doing this to me.
I can't take another one of those nights.
Were a mess all the time.
We fight and scream and yell.
We kiss we make up.
In love all over again.
And starts by the next day.
Seven months of the same routine.
Please stop doing this to me.
I do nothing wrong.
Can't you see?
Copyright ©
ladybell
... [
2010-09-24 13:17:32]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Can't you see?
(User Rating: 1 )
by chrisdavid on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 01:33:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hi there,
You display your feelings and emotions well.
Chris. |
|
|
Re: Can't you see?
(User Rating: 1 )
by evah2121 on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 10:35:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I can feel disappointment but you have to remember to stay strong if he's worth fighting for. hope everything works well. Great writing (: |
|
|
Re: Can't you see?
(User Rating: 1 )
by xbabycyutie on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 08:25:06 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
i feel like this at times but i can never write about it.
if its meant to be then it is. fight for lovee (: haha.
great work. |
|
|
Re: Can't you see?
(User Rating: 1 )
by jennguy41 on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 05:04:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I had one like that and they really can't see what we do. Good luck it does get better. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
