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writing in the sky
Contributed by
samueloliverrr
on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 08:04:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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writing in the sky,
i write lonely like the clouds on high,
staring down i see you,
i see your fire in the ravens eye
holding me up so high
dropping me, down i go.
how did i get this high?
and how did you get so low?,
beneath my feet you stand still
perfecting my silence through tears,
catch them as they fall
catch me as, i fall.
the clouds, high
my mind, even higher
perfect my silence through fears
and i will dry those tears.
i write on the sky
while my clouds are on high,
im perfected through your silence,
my cloud floats on high
our cloud floats on high.
watch me as i fall...
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samueloliverrr
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2010-09-24 08:04:13]
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Re: writing in the sky
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by bubly on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 11:48:02 AM AEST
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| I like your poem.Actually I can relate to it.Nicely written. |
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Re: writing in the sky
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by xbabycyutie on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 08:28:23 AM AEST
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i actually felt this
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great work. |
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Re: writing in the sky
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by samueloliverrr on
Monday, 27th September 2010 @ 06:35:48 AM AEST
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| thank you very much i am glad you both can relate! |
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