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Dawn Winter Rising.
Contributed by
cashfan1
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Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 02:09:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Dawn winter rising
Frost fresh and emerald on the hills.
The sun, born from a womb of stars,
Hangs lazily over the iced goblet
Of the valley floor.
The air is thin with frost
And the promise of a new day.
In the hawthorn hedge a breeze murmurs
A soft lullaby, soothing.
And the cry of the buzzard is a teardrop
Frozen on the mid air loneliness.
On a far distant cairn a shadow moves
Blue sharp and desolate,
A jet plane glides across the rink of sky
Trailing a ghost plume far behind.
And walking away I leave my image
Branded in frost on the hillside
Of this dawn winter rising.
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Re: Dawn Winter Rising.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 02:20:11 AM AEST
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| Peaceful, serene, and nice imagery... and perhaps a tad chilly. ;-) |
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Re: Dawn Winter Rising.
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by mysticmercury on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 04:22:27 AM AEST
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| loved it! believe me, recited it couple of times..:) |
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Re: Dawn Winter Rising.
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 05:28:52 AM AEST
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| You have buzzards in Wales?? |
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Re: Dawn Winter Rising.
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 02:10:00 AM AEST
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| Can feel the cold aloneness with the hint of life and warmth almost with the pattern of your breath as you absorb this environment with your identity stamped for a brief while and then the raising of expectation as a new day dawns,you form the connection, then we are standing where you are and can see clearly. what more can you want from a writer, excellent |
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Re: Dawn Winter Rising.
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 09:28:40 PM AEST
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this was a pleasure to read
thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Dawn Winter Rising.
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by spud on
Tuesday, 5th October 2010 @ 12:42:23 PM AEST
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Hi Dennis,
Quite simply a fine piece of verse! Read it 3 times
and got colder with each read.
You paint pictures in vivid dictum - and, isn't that
what poetry is all about?
Tommy
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