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You Think!
Contributed by
bubly
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Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 11:51:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I would go on with life fine without you.
You thought!
Fine it shall be
As i forget sudden outburst of emotions.
Emotions!
You thought.
All that it was,
A hormonal situation,
Provoked by secretion of some hormones in blood,
A momenttary act,
You thought.
Like myself drunken with a carafe of pure wine,
Unaware,unconscious,
Pleasure in trance,
Will disappear as the dawn acsends.
You thought.
But not that i was addicted to the wine,
Addicted to its worst,perrhaps not to the finest wine,
A good drunker I am
And alcohols are indeed malignant.
Paralyzed to my addiction of self destruction,
You humoured with a question of dark and dawn.
As it is no longer a question of dark or dawn,
Continuation till life gies on,
That I was very aware to,not drunken to
You never thoought.
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bubly
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2010-09-23 23:51:51]
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Re: You Think!
(User Rating: 1 )
by suzyo on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 04:25:51 AM AEST
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| very confusing poem..were the spelling mistakes done on purpose? |
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Re: You Think!
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by samueloliverrr on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 12:14:35 PM AEST
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| love it! keep it up! |
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