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Lost within the sweet dreams
Contributed by
shelby
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Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 08:19:41 PM in AEST
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Lost and found within sweet dreams of yesterdays but now it seems, so long ago.. drifting with the hush of a soft fall breeze...... precious be the memories , bitter-sweet, they are mine... all mine
A little rain fall softly creeps
the clouds roll in
the Heavens weep
Lost inside sweet memories again.
I feel them all
the memories stream
resting inside sweet daydreams
bitter-sweet they softly call.
A little rain,
a tiny tear
a soft surrender
never fear
they call my name
fading away
lost inside the sweet dreams.
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shelby
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2010-09-23 20:19:41]
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Re: Lost within the sweet dreams
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by emystar on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 08:49:46 PM AEST
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Beautiful, girl friend.
yeah, sometimes memories aren't always sweet but we gotta balance the bad with the good.
luv, huggs, fall blessings,
emy |
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Re: Lost within the sweet dreams
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by Recyclebin on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 09:15:52 PM AEST
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I agree with Emy,
You have such a way of putting thoughts on paper.
I am also glad I was on tonight to read your poem.
Take care,
~Bin~ |
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Re: Lost within the sweet dreams
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by Mila on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 11:39:01 PM AEST
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| i feelt lost in your poem :) very nice put. |
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Re: Lost within the sweet dreams
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 02:11:04 AM AEST
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I often find myself getting lost in sweet day dreams or sweet memories but then I snap back to reality and think, damn what a ***** she was!!!
But I could get lost in your sweet poem and just get lost...*sigh* and remember it is sweet.
Tim
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Re: Lost within the sweet dreams
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by suzyo on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 04:33:35 AM AEST
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| WELL DONE,SUCH BEAUTIFUL WORDS> |
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Re: Lost within the sweet dreams
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by unknown_utopia on
Saturday, 25th September 2010 @ 09:33:21 PM AEST
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oh this is so good
Excellent flowing write. |
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