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Cinnimon Betrayal
Contributed by
CarrieLindeman
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 06:54:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sit on the plush pink carpet of the floor
I remember back to a night like many others before
You let me hold you like we used to
I could feel you pulling away
I didn't let myself overthink you
My corsage was fresh
You gave your mom credit
Your tie didn't match my dress
And for once you cared more than I
At dinner before the dance
We got cinnimon candles
We smelled the sweet fragrance
I took mine home
You left yours there
Every night before I let my mind roam
I would breath in the scent of the sweet air
My mind would spiral backwards
Into your arms that night again
You told me the truth
The sad, sick truth
You thought it did not matter
That our love was in the past
But by telling me the truth
Every memory of you
Is tinged with heart achy feelings
You never really loved me
I burned that candle last night
The flame flickered for hours
When the scent reached my nose
It smelled bitter.
Copyright ©
CarrieLindeman
... [
2010-09-23 18:54:00]
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Re: Cinnimon Betrayal
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by emystar on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 09:04:47 PM AEST
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Sad but you did a good job telling the story.
Welcome to YPDC, blessings,
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Re: Cinnimon Betrayal
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by shelby on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 09:08:03 PM AEST
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This is really sad, filled with such tender emotions.
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Re: Cinnimon Betrayal
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by chrisdavid on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 01:43:50 PM AEST
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Oh, this is so sad. Your emotions poured off the page. You deserve better.
Take care, Chris. |
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Re: Cinnimon Betrayal
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by evah2121 on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 10:48:26 PM AEST
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| I'm sure he's missing out, because he doesn't deserve someone as great as you. You are filled with wisdom and potential, i hope everything works out. This was a beautiful piece. |
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