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Dreaming of you
Contributed by
Bexstasy
on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 11:36:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your face still possesses my dreams,
I kiss your lips, so perfect it seems,
But then I wake,
And you're still gone,
My tears escape in silent streams.
I still long to feel your hand touch mine,
I miss the way your eyes would shine,
But never again,
'Cause you're still gone,
For a reason I just can't define.
I often wish you'd knock on my door,
Greet me with a smile, just like before,
But I know you won't,
And you're still gone,
And my heart is still beaten and sore.
Sometimes I pretend it isn't true,
That we stayed together and our love grew,
But that won't happen,
'Cause you're still gone,
And I'm still here dreaming of you.
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Bexstasy
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2010-09-23 11:36:57]
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Re: Dreaming of you
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by chrisdavid on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 01:21:06 PM AEST
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Mmm. You clearly still have feelings for this guy. Did you leave him or him leave you? Why didn't it work out?
Chris. |
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Re: Dreaming of you
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 05:35:33 PM AEST
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VERY nice Bex....left me wondering if it was love gone awry or if he died - although, they seem the same at times.
Cheers babe. |
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Re: Dreaming of you
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by suzyo on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 06:25:04 PM AEST
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| I sure do empathize..i feel the exact same way right now. |
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Re: Dreaming of you
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by evah2121 on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 10:53:52 PM AEST
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| Your writing Is lovely, I love the way you display your feelings. Amazing work, I'm sure time will tell If he Is really worth the wait. Be patient (: Be aware, and optimistic. |
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Re: Dreaming of you
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by CarrieLindeman on
Sunday, 26th September 2010 @ 05:28:35 PM AEST
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| Lovely work! I feel for you |
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