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Things will come to an end
Contributed by
Rasberry
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Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 10:25:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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From the bursting buds in spring to the icy cold winds in winter
All things will come to an end sooner or later,
Flowers open and fruits ripen,
Trees become bare as their leaves fall
Youth is lost and old age catches up with one and all,
Caterpillars won't be forever,
Along the way we may lose those we treasure,
tic toc tic toc..an hour is lost,open your eyes the stars do not shine,
The tide is high,the tide is low
Through passing phases lost is the moon that glows,
A storm moves in only to soon go,
The cycle of life is constantly moving,
A daughter to a mother,a son to a father,
Couples no longer love each other,
Life won't last forever,
All things will come to an end sooner or later.
Copyright ©
Rasberry
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2010-09-21 22:25:21]
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Re: Things will come to an end
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by NewGuy on
Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 11:48:45 PM AEST
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| interesting prespective. IT feels a bit distracted... im not sure how to word it. It is a good work....but feels like something is missing. |
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Re: Things will come to an end
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by suzyo on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 05:39:44 AM AEST
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| i agree....I get what your saying...but a little scattered.keep it up tho |
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Re: Things will come to an end
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 08:24:04 AM AEST
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"Trees become 'bare' as their leaves fall".
An interesting write....keep it up. |
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Re: Things will come to an end
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 11:27:07 AM AEST
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i enjoyed this...
this kind of theme has been daunting in my mind.
hope to read more of your pieces
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Things will come to an end
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by Mila on
Thursday, 23rd September 2010 @ 11:41:38 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed it and it's so true everything does come to an end! |
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Re: Things will come to an end
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by chrisdavid on
Friday, 24th September 2010 @ 12:39:33 PM AEST
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So very true. Excellent flow, enjoyed.
Chris. |
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Re: Things will come to an end
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th August 2012 @ 04:20:20 AM AEST
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| A beautiful poem about the idea that nothing lasts - to me, it also has a sense of regret at the endless passing of things around us. But the poem also expresses the delicate beauty of things so easily missed and forgotten. I really love this - everything is so brilliantly put. |
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