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Contributed by
DeLeriousTearZ
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Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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you have to understand
Please i'm begging you
I do it for a reason
for the hUrt i've been going through
Please understand me
It concerns myself not you
For doing this to my body
Makes me relieved...makes me true
Understand the bloodiness
Understand the marks
Understand my soul is empty....
now defeated.
Dark.
I won't answer any more questions
Nor speak another word
I told you just to Understand
Forget it... be assured
Locking me up won't do a thing
Medicine's too slow
Understand God damn it
That I just want to Go
Open your mouth to anyone ...
I will not look at you again
For I'm telling you just to understand
I'm calling it the end.
But I don't want to leave you
without a compromise
Understand that i got some help...
honestly i tried
Take the word...
repeat it
Without the sound of cries
And you will soon be on your way
And you'll understand so am I.
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DeLeriousTearZ
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2003-04-19 18:05:00]
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Re: No Title
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by pam on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 06:12:03 PM AEST
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| wow..that is a really deep poem but know that I really do understand. I know the empty hurting feeling that you feel inside that just won't go away. Keep up the good writing. |
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by BlackFire9786 on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 06:40:21 PM AEST
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I understand perfectly, and that was a beautiful poem...the descriptions were amazing. also,
For doing this to my body
Makes me relieved...makes me true
Understand the bloodiness
Understand the marks
does this stanza refer to self-injury or is it just metaphoric? Just wondering b/c it reminded me of my self-injury problems.
Lots of Love! Lisa (((((HUGS)))) |
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by Ju-Ju on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 07:18:20 PM AEST
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Great poem! really good, i understand completly, its exactly what im going through.. read some of my poems, there very simalar to yours. and i really liked the last part..
Take the word...
repeat it
Without the sound of cries
And you will soon be on your way
And you'll understand so am I.
.... i feel you !! hang in there! |
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by purpleflames on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 07:07:02 PM AEST
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| cutting i think thats what your doing and if thats what your doing. i know how you feel. Unlike those people that say they do but then have no F*#king clue. i know beacuse i cut to it the out to feel relief |
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