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a new story begins
Contributed by
irisblue
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 07:31:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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DRESSED IN WHITE, AN INNOCENT LIE
HIS HAND TO HOLD, HIS HEARTS BEEN SOLD
ROSES , DAISIES, DEAD ON THE FLOOR
MY MIND GOES , BUT NOT WHEN I AM WITH HIM
MY HEART OPEN AND NOW TORN
SO MUCH PAIN, AND TORMENT
UNLESS I AM NAKED BY HIS SIDE
SO DIFFERENT SO THE SAME
MY PAST MY ILLNESS NOT TO BLAME
GIVEN AWAY SO YOUNG , SO I FEAR WHAT'S TO COME
LETTING GO CAN FEEL SO GOOD, I AM READY NOW
TO BEGIN LIFE NEW AND GIVE LOVE SOMEHOW
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irisblue
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2010-09-21 07:31:33]
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Re: a new story begins
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by holy on
Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 10:15:05 AM AEST
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Sadly but winged word, I taste every word with heart and soul. Really great writer!
Well done, I will look forward to hear you one more time. |
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Re: a new story begins
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by NewGuy on
Tuesday, 21st September 2010 @ 11:52:41 PM AEST
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| wow! just very wow! a delicate but powerful piece |
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Re: a new story begins
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 20th March 2015 @ 09:45:20 PM AEST
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I sense bittersweet emotions running through this poem... Perhaps I am wrong...
Jenni_K |
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Re: a new story begins
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 21st April 2015 @ 12:36:17 PM AEST
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Releasing that Inner emotional flow
is a must....... |
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Re: a new story begins
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by JamesStockdale on
Sunday, 2nd August 2020 @ 12:22:16 AM AEST
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Spectacular expression.......
Great writing... |
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