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Trying to Reach You

Contributed by Crys on Friday, 2nd August 2002 @ 08:21:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

All this time I've been trying to reach you,
Thinking I was failing.
I wanted to touch the lives of others,
But appeared unavailing.

I decided to finally give up,
Thinking I could never win.
You were just too difficult to get through to,
I couldn't find the "you" within.

It seemed you wouldn't let me by
That ever so tall and sturdy wall.
As to how you could hold everything back
Has kept me very well enthralled.

But there came the day you proved me wrong,
By voicing how you feel.
You were always one of very few words,
I must admit, it was surreal!!!

Just when I'd decided to give up,
You decided to give in.
You realized we needed each other,
and we needed to know the "Us" within.

In doing so, you've helped me,
Not only in a "Me" sense...
But you've helped me to help you,
Climb over your defense.

I'm glad I could be here,
To do for you what you've done for me.
To shine a guiding light,
and piece together our debris.

I love you Jen (FUZZ)

Copyright © Crys ... [ 2002-08-02 20:21:00]
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Re: Trying to Reach You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 11:43:05 AM AEST
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Great poem , they are very lucky to have a friend like you there lives and you too. Be there for each other. Friendship is beautiful when done with much love.

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