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Left Her In Blue

Contributed by lyric5 on Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 03:28:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



He left her in crimson

rounded by his affection

she ain't no girl

he called her a lovely woman

you better snatch me, he said

cause I'm not gonna sit around

waiting for you to love me

she stayed silent

so he left her in blue



the key was sitting there

she was afraid to touch it

thinking her fingers would tarnish the surface

so locked and loveless

locked and tainted

oh, what could've been

if he had waited

but he left her in blue



locked in who they said she was

locked in who she thought she should be

I said, so what if he went to black?

we can make blue a party

we can make blue beautiful

oooh, she don't wanna hear it

she don't wanna leave the comfort

of pretending to be someone else



he left her in violet

when he gave a new lover ecstacy

she almost felt his hands again

but they were her own in the middle of the night

he knows she sighs

but he brings his new love to white



locked in what she believes, percieves, concieves

locked in who she loves, who she wants

and what she needs

well girl, I know a granduer place to go

it's called yellow

nevermind what they say



you are quite too pretty to go this way.






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Re: Left Her In Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by SilentMuse on Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 04:46:03 PM AEST
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You have captured in words what I could not manage to. You write well, are you a musician?


Re: Left Her In Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by suzyo on Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 07:29:37 PM AEST
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great poem..well written.




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