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Liar
Contributed by
Bexstasy
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Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 11:05:22 AM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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I never want to see you again,
Or hear your name out loud,
I don't care what you do with your life,
I don't care if you are proud,
Just keep yourself away from me,
There is nothing left to say,
I don't give my time to liars,
I won't waste it on you anyway,
You can take back all your memories,
And keep all of your ****,
It's all smothered in your betrayal,
And I would rather not touch it,
Where's the love I had for you?
I burnt it with your gifts,
The only thing I kept from you,
Is this hate clenched in my fists.
Copyright ©
Bexstasy
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2010-09-20 11:05:22]
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Re: Liar
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by suzyo on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 04:21:52 PM AEST
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| Very strong words and emotions |
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Re: Liar
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by emystar on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 05:21:19 PM AEST
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Very powerful write.
You kept the worst from them.
Great job.
I hate lies too. I can take the truth any day but can't tolerate lies.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Liar
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by SilentMuse on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 06:09:56 PM AEST
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| The ending ties it in quite well. |
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Re: Liar
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by unknown_utopia on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 09:21:56 PM AEST
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I like the raw energy in this
good stuff |
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Re: Liar
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by 2bpositive on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 10:20:40 AM AEST
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I feel your pain
in time it shall wane
but as far as the hate
you must let it abate
You have the courage to let go
And with your poem, does it show
You're never alone.
Thumbs up to you! |
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Re: Liar
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by becky20 on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 01:27:02 PM AEST
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| I really like this, i can feel your emotion. You sum it up best in the last two lines. You paint a vicious image, well done x |
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Re: Liar
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by jamesatteb on
Saturday, 13th November 2010 @ 03:06:09 PM AEST
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oh how i have felt this way before !!
i love your work and we do seem to have alot in common and btw i am loving it here !! :D |
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