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Lonely Woman
Contributed by
Hooligan785
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Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 12:15:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Shes crying herself to sleep tonight
Lonely and feeling sad
So many dreams became her enemies
So many wishes turned out bad
Shes confused about her choices
and eloped with past mistakes
Beautiful in every way
yet surrounded by heartless snakes
Dreaming upon a cloud
Yet so timid with actions of love
Wondering if God had good intentions for her
When he sent her from up above
She tries the best she can
Just to keep her spirit strong
and find that perfect man
that won't ever do her wrong
Words of wisdom pass through fingers
and flow gently to the heart
Keep your hopes and dreams alive
Don't let them snakes pull you apart
I see them tears inside your eyes
I see the pain that holds you down
I'd wipe away them all
just to take away that frown
because your beautiful to me
And understand that life isn't perfect
But if I can only make you smile
then every minute spent was werth it
So keep your head up Baby Doll
And know that better days will come
They say that struggle makes you stronger
so you had to go through some........
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Re: Lonely Woman
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 04:24:56 AM AEST
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I like it....though you might ask the mods to change 'werth' to 'worth' - not that a typo detracts from the content.
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Re: Lonely Woman
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by suzyo on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 04:37:32 AM AEST
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| This is an absolutely beautiful poem. Do you know me? LOL. It seems to tell my life story. LOVE IT!!! |
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Re: Lonely Woman
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by Hooligan785 on
Monday, 20th September 2010 @ 01:00:22 PM AEST
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| Thank you for your comments! I Truly appreciate them |
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