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Another night
Contributed by
doeyd
on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 08:14:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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install the insomnia
the one who left last
forgot to close the door
now winds rush in
with creatures
never seen
too much light
to witness
memories play a game
that brings cruel loss
to a never ending cycle
we call it repetition
alone for all reasons
as if no longer a member
and please remember
to dismember your mind
you despise its existence
and its friend
the resistence
nothing is even
nothng is fair
all we can feel
is the cold night air
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Re: Another night
(User Rating: 1 ) by Awesomeness on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 09:32:11 AM AEST (User
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I like this poem a lot! |
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Re: Another night
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 09:34:31 AM AEST (User
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Quite like this poem. It's well-arranged, better than most of the twaddle on here anyway!! |
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Re: Another night
(User Rating: 1 ) by pinkunicornoctober on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 11:16:35 AM AEST (User
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Good poem! Great job! |
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Re: Another night
(User Rating: 1 ) by TryingMyLuck on
Wednesday, 15th September 2010 @ 12:12:00 AM AEST (User
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Really nice, I can relate.
Thanks for sharing. |
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