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the members. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Monday, 13th September 2010 @ 08:31:27 PM in AEST
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the members. . .
no good-byes moved in subtle unison. . .
a final thought cowered in a corner, now stark & bare
there was no omni-present sense of anything
just my cold & oh so distant stare
I shift. . . time moves. . . ahead of me. . .
I chant. . . careen. . . sometimes I fall. . . I guess
they finally got the best of me. . . those arms within these walls
MMMmmwwwhhhahaha!!!!!!
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Re: the members. . .
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 01:01:22 AM AEST
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There are times that I have absolutely no idea what you are writing about but still find myself loving what you write because of the images you implant within my visual cortex.
I felt as though I was in a dream. That's what this did for me. I often come back to read your poems or even keep re-reading it while I am here and will get something different altogether.
You are unique; you are genius.  
Thank you.
Tim
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Re: the members. . .
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 08:11:28 AM AEST
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lol Probably one of your strangest ever poems, but the strangeness makes it interesting.
-Phil |
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Re: the members. . .
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by ming on
Wednesday, 15th September 2010 @ 11:10:17 AM AEST
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Elle,
Are you looking in my window? :) Love you & this...
I shift. . . time moves. . . ahead of me. . .
I chant. . . careen. . . sometimes I fall
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Re: the members. . .
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 12:03:49 AM AEST
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| I soo get it now...but still skeery! |
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