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Dark Forest of my mind
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Monday, 13th September 2010 @ 09:33:07 AM in AEST
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I see the insainity in my mind
Here lately I've felt changed a man of another kind
And I have but my insainity
I believe is still in me
I see a layout of my mind
The present is not bright
And just full of so much light
She's with me all the time
And yet there seems to be a forest
Separate from the rest
Dark and cold
So taunting in what horrors it could hold
The roots feed by blood
The walkway a crimson kind of mud
Each shadow a voice
Screaming back the past, but I made a choice
I had creativity
In my insainity
So much imagery
But now I'm in the light
Everything looks so bright
And I still have my insainity
My creativity
Only by walking through the forest
Going my own little quest
Through the reaches of my mind
Trying to see all the horrors I can find
This dark forest could only bring pain
Could only drive me insaine
But a small stroll
See what it holds
I'll always come back to you in the light
You just so bright
I'd never lose my way from you
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Voice of the Silent
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2010-09-13 09:33:07]
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Re: Dark Forest of my mind
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by tam on
Monday, 13th September 2010 @ 04:35:00 PM AEST
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| This poem needs editing. The first part of the poem is hard to follow. The second half is better. All great poets write and re-write. I believe you have the soul of a poet so keep at it. |
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Re: Dark Forest of my mind
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th September 2010 @ 04:20:29 PM AEST
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Well Kelly,
I'm just happy to have u back posting.
Really good work, my friend.
Big huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Dark Forest of my mind
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by SilentMuse on
Friday, 22nd October 2010 @ 09:14:18 PM AEST
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| I must admit I wanted you to write for selfish reasons as well. I love your poetry, even the ones you were reluctant to let me read. |
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