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Earthquakes
Contributed by
KIRIX
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Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 04:55:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Relief run though her veins.
It’s finally over, calls coming from every angle of the room.
She picks one up, a soothing familiar voice starts to speak,
She’s trying not to sound panicked but she is talking to the one person that knows her to well.
She see’s light peering through the window, she knows everything will be okay.
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Re: Earthquakes
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by Obnoxious_Bread on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 05:08:51 PM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: Earthquakes
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 05:21:01 PM AEST
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I enjoy this brief but vivid depiction of a crisis situation. I could feel the aftermath and the calm feeling of survival. Nice job!
Heidi |
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Re: Earthquakes
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 06:04:44 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Really good writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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