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Change With Time
Contributed by
darkwolf
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Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 09:17:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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As time here goes on
Memories of my past fade
Who I was is being erased
And a new me is being formed
Though bits of me tend to stick
My friends of old
My love that holds true
These are memories that will stay
Never should my friends forgotten
Never will my love for her be lost
My views and goals of life may change
But my personality and who i really am will forever remain.
Copyright ©
darkwolf
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2010-09-12 09:17:35]
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Re: Change With Time
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by Pidge on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 09:21:31 AM AEST
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A nice poem.
Felt I could relate to it. :) |
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Re: Change With Time
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by tam on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 09:34:56 AM AEST
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| I loved it until the last two lines. Something doesn't fit but what a great topic with eloquent words. |
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Re: Change With Time
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by natizzle on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 04:24:30 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. You put in words what I sometimes try and fail at. Take care. |
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Re: Change With Time
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by Debris on
Sunday, 19th September 2010 @ 05:11:52 AM AEST
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| I like this. It's almost a Statement of Self, rather than anything else. If based on you, then very personal- if purely poetic, then very insightful. Thanks for sharing this piece. |
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