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REVENGE
Contributed by
tlhodges51
on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 06:34:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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The world so small or so it seems,
All the while my pain and anger is bursting at the seams.
You scream and yell at me one more time,
I tell you I will end it on a dime.
You don’t believe me so you do,
I grab my knife and push it into you.
The people walking by just stares,
All the while your flesh I tear.
The silver blade cuts through your chest.
I told you its not me you should test.
I watch the blood begin to flow,
I smile and begin to glow.
My pain is now over so you see.
Told you not to mess with me.
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Re: REVENGE
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by Bexstasy on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 02:29:49 PM AEST
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| Woaaah, I like this in an evil sort of way. Ahaa. It's good. |
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Re: REVENGE
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by tinybitinsane on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 02:59:27 PM AEST
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| hell ya! i love this get em lol it was great |
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Re: REVENGE
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Sunday, 12th September 2010 @ 06:51:29 PM AEST
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| Remind me never to ask you on a date. YIKES!!! LMGDAO :)) |
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Re: REVENGE
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by keela12 on
Saturday, 6th November 2010 @ 01:34:21 PM AEST
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i agree if i tell u stay away pls do
lol
i aint give u wrong by the way i police didnt catch u |
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Re: REVENGE
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by 2bpositive on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 01:55:23 AM AEST
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If words can kill
I would surely keep clear
but after reading your poem, I think
One of us really might need a shrink!
So much for trying to be me - 2bpositive! |
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Re: REVENGE
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by RyanS on
Tuesday, 22nd February 2011 @ 06:06:51 PM AEST
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| wow, thats awesome! I wish you had more |
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